This is not a bad start but I think you could still improve it quite a bit. If you look at the standard of your writing about others magazines I think you will see that. Also you need to watch your terminology: "Puffs"? Where has that come from? I also think you could present this in a more appealing way.
This is not a bad start but I think you could still improve it quite a bit. If you look at the standard of your writing about others magazines I think you will see that. Also you need to watch your terminology: "Puffs"? Where has that come from? I also think you could present this in a more appealing way.
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